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audience: Concerned local residents,crime news followers
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datelinelocation: NEW YORK
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NEW YORK – A shooting in the Bronx on Saturday evening resulted in one fatality and four injuries,including a teenage girl who is in critical condition,according to law enforcement officials.
The incident occurred near Haffen Park, at the intersection of burke Avenue and Wickham Avenue. Officers from the New York City Police Department (NYPD) responded to reports of gunfire at approximately 7:30 p.m.
Upon arrival, police discovered a 32-year-old man wiht a gunshot wound to the chest and a 17-year-old girl with a gunshot wound to the face.
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A shooting in New york City on Saturday left one person dead and four people wounded. (do)
Both victims were immediately transported to a local hospital. The 32-year-old man was pronounced dead at the hospital, while the 17-year-old girl remains in critical condition.
Authorities reported that three additional victims, all suffering from gunshot wounds, arrived at area hospitals independently.
Officers responded at around 7:30 p.m.to a report of a shooting on Burke Avenue and Wickham Avenue. (Do)
The additional victims included a 30-year-old man and a 29-year-old woman, both with gunshot wounds to the back and listed in stable condition.A 42-year-old man was also wounded in the arm and is in stable condition.
The NYPD has confirmed that four individuals have been taken into custody in connection with the shooting, and multiple firearms were recovered from the scene.
Police said four people were taken into custody and multiple guns were recovered. (Do)
The investigation into the shooting is ongoing.
Reports indicate that the shooting occurred in proximity to Haffen Park, were a large crowd had gathered to watch a basketball tournament. Preliminary information suggests the incident might potentially be gang-related, according to sources.
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